In Reply to: critiique posted by Toby Belle on September 22, 2003 at 13:53:37:
Well you asked for it. The foreground is a mess and should be cropped out. The focus of the shot is the man in the light leaning over and the whole shot should be about him. You cant see the person he is shaking hands with and that is bad. There are a lot of peoples backs in the shot and that is also a worry. The light from the video camera should be cropped out as it is very distracting. I do not know any of the people in the shot so I am only interested in the image. This is not a good photograph....I teach this stuff and I am being honest with you.
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- Re: critiique - phlogiston 23:00:43 10/04/03 (7)
- That is hilarious! nt - muse 17:43:05 12/18/03 (0)
- Beg to differ with your teaching- as a news photo editor - Joe M 21:24:28 10/05/03 (4)
- Re: Beg to differ with your teaching- as a news photo editor - phlogiston 15:00:06 10/06/03 (0)
- Hear hear Joe....................... You can teach me if ya want...............(nt) - R B 03:56:26 10/06/03 (2)
- OK, but remember no drinking in class.......unless you bring the XXXX - Joe M 07:03:28 10/06/03 (1)
- Re: OK, but remember no drinking in class.......unless you bring the XXXX - phlogiston 15:07:39 10/06/03 (1)
- Glad you didn't teach me................(nt) - R B 05:03:49 10/05/03 (0)